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Daniel Bourne: Wilkommen! Bienvenue! Welcome! To the World Police Association Agency!, <Rank> <Name>, I am your chief, Mr. Daniel Bourne. Now, let me show you the team, this here is Vivienne Matthieu, she is my secretary, so if you have any coffee orders, just ask her.
Vivienne Matthieu: Bonjour! If you 'ave any questions, feel free to ask. Don't worry, the only way you'll get rat poison in your coffee is if you're anything like Romano!
Daniel: Moving on, this is fellow Brit, Atticus Giddleworthington, our incredibly smart profiler, so be careful if you're feeling cocky. That's a mistake I'll never make again.
Atticus Giddleworthington: Good day, I'll be in my office, upstairs and to the left.
Daniel: This is Max Storm, a trainee, he'll help you from time-to-time, if you want someone doing something, this is your man and not.......
Ricky Romano: HERE'S RICKY!!!! I just drunk my weight in beer and I'm not even slightly *hic* drunk. Hey Mako, wanna go on a date?
Mako Speltz: Touch me again and let's just say I'll hack your throat out in more ways than one.
Daniel: Ricky, are you drunk?
Ricky: Huh? No...I *hic* just had a glass of dinner with my wine...*hic*
Daniel: This is Ricky Romano, he's your main partner. Godspeed. And Mako, our technical analyst. But don't worry, her bark is worse than her bite.
Mako: Believe what you must.
Daniel: This is Sahir Anand, our coroner. I'd say he's the steadiest out of all of us,
Sahir Anand: Yes...stable... Daniel: This here is our historian, Marco Lopez. He'll look at ancient artifacts and what not.
Marco: Hey! Give me a date and I can tell you what happened on that day, 20 years ago!
Daniel: And finally is Ava Müller, the forensic analyst. She's like Mako, but 10 times worse.
Ava Müller: I'm sorry, what was that, you know I'll beat you Daniel, just like I did yesterday, and the day before.
Daniel: Ava, unless you'd like docked pay, I'd suggest to shut up. As for you <Name>, Okay, I'm going to let you patrol the British seaside.
Ricky: YEAH!!!! LET'S GO!
Daniel: No, Ricky, remember last time, we let it slide because you're sort of good at your job, but we still have the evidence on your phone. You've been banned from every public beach within Europe, Asia, South and North America and even Antartica believe it or not.
Ricky: D*mn it. You're up, kiddo.
Max Storm: YAY! Let's go.


At St. Agnes Beach, Cornwall


Max: ...And so I said, "No you get on the ground!" And that's how I got the job!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

Max: Oh my God! Did you see that, someone was pushed off the cliff over there! Let's go!


Chapter 1

Investigate Cliff Base.

Max: Oh no! That poor woman! She fell! Her lisence says she's called Irene Penn. What else did you find? A tablet and a camera. Okay, let me try the tablet...hmmm ABC123, nope, ah, Cornwall...Nope, okay you try. And the camera is also locked, great.


Examine Locked Tablet.

Max: Great you unlocked it, let's send it to Mako. She can tell us about this tablet.


Examine Locked Camera.

Max: Wow! You're a natural, I'm sure Mako will do her thing to this in no time. Oh, and you saw a woman on the beach around the cliff when the murder happened? I'll go find her.


Talk to Emily Branford.

Emily Branford: GET YOUR PASTIES HERE! WE HAVE BREAKFAST PASTIES, CORNISH PASTIES, ALL SORTS.
Max: Excuse me, Ms Branford. I'm Officer Storm and this is <Rank> <Name>, <Rank> <Name> saw you near the crime scene around the time Ms Penn was killed.
Emily: Ah, I see what you mean. Irene was my very good friend, I miss her already.
Max: We understand your shaken, but was there anyone who could hold a possible grudge against Ms Penn?
Emily: Oh sure, her sister, Monica. She was horrible to her growing up. Now, sorry officers, but I have a business to run.


Outside The Shop


Max: Emily said that this "Monica Penn" wasn't nice to her when growing up, do you think she could have taken her nastiness even further? You're right, let's go speak to her.


Talk to Monica Penn about her being mean to the victim.

Monica: What do you mean?! Did I kill Irene! Of course not! Granted I was mean to her growing up, did you have any siblings, Mr Storm?
Max: I...uh...yes.
Monica: And did they behave rudely to you?
Max: Yes, if I remember, at one point they locked me in the closet for a whole two hours.
Monica: Exactly my point! I promise I never hurt her. Look, Irene spent most of her time in the shop she worked in, go there for clues.


Outside

Max: Well Kit, do you think we can trust her, she might be lying.

Max: Hey you're right, Irene was wearing a name tag for her shop, so she can't be! Let's go.


Investigate Shop

Max: What did you find <Name>? A torn note, well, we should start somewhere I guess.


Examine Torn Note

Max: Crap, it's faded. Let's put it under the dusting kit.


Examine Faded Note

Max: Woah! Whoever wrote this was angry, "Irene you owe me £3,000!! - Ben". Wow, that's a whole ton of money, my pay per month isn't anything like that.
Max: We should look for this "Ben". Do you think that's him over there? Alright.


Talk to Ben Alexopoulous about the note.

Max: Mr. Alexopo...Alexi...Ben...

Ben Alexopoulous: Alexopoulous.

Max: 'That...Mr A. We found a note addressed to Irene Penn, saying she owed you £3,000. Why was that?

Ben: *Sigh*. A few weeks ago, I saw Irene stealing my savings. £1 Million!!!

Max: How did you have £1 Million in the first place?

Ben: I saved up, over years and years, in case I needed it, and now I do. My home country, Greece is in a lot of trouble.

Ben: We're in a humongous debt. And it was my way of saving Greece. The £3000 was just the start, she was late on her payment so I gave her a heads-up.

Max: Did you kill Irene?

Ben: Kill? Never!


Analyse Camera

Mako: I enjoyed looking at that camera, and I found some interesting things, the camera had been set to take images of the cliff at a specific time, that time being the murder.

Mako: But what the killer hadn't planned is that they'd be captured. <Name>, Max, I can tell you your killer wears blue.

Max: Great! Thanks, Mako!

Mako: My pleasure.


Analyse Tablet

Mako: The tablet you gave me was fun to look at.

Mako: It turns out your victim was planning on leaving the country! I found nothing about your killer, but maybe your victim was trying to get out of the country to get away from someone.


Autopsy Victim's Body

Sahir: The poor girl, at least she was put out of her misery fast.

Sahir: The fall broke her spine instantly, shattered. From head to toe, literally, it dislocated her skull from the spine and killed her instantly.

Max: Did you find anything about the killer?

Sahir: Of course! On her chest I found a waxy substance, lip balm to be precise, your killer must have worn it and wiped their mouth with their hand, and when pushing her, they left traces, your killer wears lip balm for sure!


After A Long Day


Max: I can't make heads or tails with this case, <Name>. There's Emily Branford who appears to hold no grudge against her whatsoever, and her sister, Monica appears to be fine as well, out of our suspects, no one appears to hate this woman!

Atticus: Haha! I may just have cracked your case!

Max: What?!


Chapter 2

Atticus: You two, I may have just cracked the case!

Max: What...what do you mean, Atticus?

Atticus: Well, think of it this way.

Richard: Or this way...

Atticus: Richard! Be quiet!

Ricky: Don't call me Richard, old man!

Chief Bourne: Ricky, shut up! Atticus, continue.

Atticus: Thank you, Daniel. As I was saying, the killer is a man! Look, when a woman gets into a fight with another woman, they often pull each others hair, scratch each other and what not, unless it was a surprise attack, which it couldn't have been.

Atticus: Sahir had confirmed that there were no cells on the back of the body, correct?

Sahir: Correct.

Atticus: So it all makes sense!

Max: You're right! When ever my sister gets into a fight she always comes back with a scratch or two on her face.

Max: We have no new leads though, what do you say we go visit Monica again?


Talk to Monica Penn for new leads

Monica: You two, again? Let me just re apply my lip balm.

Max: Hi, Monica. We were wondering if you had any new leads.

Monica: Not many, although, now you mention it, I did see Irene's neighbour, Margaret Butterfield hanging around her house.

Max: Thanks, Monica. Let's go speak to Margaret.


Ask Margaret Butterfield why she was hanging around the victim's house.

Max: Hello, are you Margaret Butterfield?

Margaret: Why yes I am!

Max: We have reason to believe you were snooping around Irene Penn's garden, why was that?

Margaret: The garden show is coming up you see, and I was going to win, but my flowers suddenly died. And everyone knows Irene has the best garden in the entirety of Cornwall, but my trick is to put lip balm on the leaves, makes them look shiny.

Max: Did you know Irene died this morning?

Margaret: Did she now? Oh...um, I have to go...see my flowers! --- Max: You're right, <Name>. Margaret did act very strange, but she wouldn't have killed for a garden.

Max: Wait, you're telling me you arrested someone who killed for a show as well before! That's horrible!

Max: You're right, let's go visit Irene's special garden.


Investigate Garden.

Max: So, wha'dya find?

Max: Wow, either someone has a grudge against paper or they don't want us to know whats on this note, I'll leave it to you, and a purse. It has a combination! What kind of purse has a goddamn combination!.

Max: Well, I'm useless at this stuff, you can try.

Examine Shredded Note

Max: Oh my God! You did that so fast!. What does it say? "Irene, Call me". Who do you think that number belongs to?

Max: You're right, Mako will tell us.

Examine Locked Purse

Max: Alrighty, oh for god's sake! There's so much crap in here! It'll take us forever to find anything of any value!

Max: Alright, <Name>, It's your funeral.

Examine Purse

Max: A business card? But it's faded. Let's put it under the dusting kit.

Examine Faded Business Card

Max: You did it! Oh look, that's the same logo Emily Branford has on her apron! This must belong to her. Let's ask her what she was doing at Irene's.

Ask Emily Branford what she was doing in Irenes' garden.

Emily Branford: Oh, nothing bad! As I said, Irene was a good friend of mine, she bought pasties and we were good friends, she lent me some lip balm from time to time..

Max Storm: Alright, I believe you, there's nothing wrong with that.

Analyse Phone Number

Mako Speltz: So the number you gave me was a piece of cake...

Max Storm: So then why did you take so long?

Mako Speltz: I...uhm...nothing, anyway. The number belongs to a certain Ross McNeilson. An English teacher at the Truro Primary School.

Max Storm: Great, Mako. Let's go speak to him.

Ask Ross McNeilson why he asked Irene to call him.

Max Storm: Mr. McNeilson, <Rank> <Name> wants to know why you asked Irene Penn to call you.

Ross McNeilson: She's an attractive woman, why can't I?

Max Storm: Because she was murdered earlier today.

Ross McNeilson: Oh NO! IRENE!

Ross McNeilson: *sigh* Irene flirted with me a lot, and I was head over heels in love with her.

Ross McNeilson: But, it was too good to be true, she didn't love me back. It was just out of pity.

Ross McNeilson: Please, officers. May I have some time alone?

Back at the station...

Max Storm: Okay, <Name>, let's think, Ross McNeilson was in love with our victim, but she only liked him as a friend. Margaret Butterfield hated Irene over a silly garden competition.

Max Storm: And Monica....

Monica Penn: Officers!

Max Storm: Speak of the devil.

Monica Penn: I have something that can help you!

CHAPTER 3

Monica Penn: Hello! I have something that will help!

Max Storm: Really! Thank goodness!

Monica Penn: Yeah, come speak to me!

Ask Monica Penn about how she could help.

Max Storm: So, how could you help Ms Penn?

Monica Penn: Well, someone slipped something through my letterbox.

Ricky Romano: What?!

Max Storm: Nothing. Carry on Ms Penn, and go away Ricky.

Monica Penn: Well, this note was given to me.

Max Storm: '"Monica, you're next."

Max Storm: Oh my God! This must be our killer's! Quick <Name>, examine it, see if the killer left anything on it!

Max Storm: And, yeah. I suppose we could have a look at Irene's shop.

Investigate Fruit Aisle

Ben Alexopoulous: GET OUT! And NEVER come back! You wretch.

Emily Branford: Fine! I didn't do anything!

Max Storm: What was that? Let's look around first, though.

Max Storm: What did you find? A faded message, huh? Well, let's reveal that.

Examine Faded Message

Max Storm: '"Margaret, I poisoned your flowers

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