Talk:Murder Comes First/@comment-26287054-20160604081948

You asked my opinion, so here it is! Your case name is already 90/100, but you have many things to fix. Here's the list:


 * The plot is okay. If you wish, you can furnish it later.


 * The Killer Profile and James' profile DOES NOT match. The KP says the killer has blue eyes, but James has brown.


 * For writing steps, (ex.  Prerequisite: Locked Phone Examined: New Suspect: James Savage), for seperating different actions, do not use colon, use semicolon instead.

That's all from me, thanks:)

 @ldrianyf   ^o^   %  08:19, June 4, 2016 (UTC)