Thread:120.62.204.95/@comment-24012291-20140314123532

I finished reading your incomplete case and there's a few things that's wrong with it.

1. There is no "Thief". There can ONLY be a killer.

2. The victim CANNOT be a suspect since they are dead. According to your case, your victim was just drugged and robbed. They HAVE to be murdered in order to make your case relevant.

3. Explain to me what the last step in Chapter 2 means. Are there going to be a total of 14 suspects in your case? There can only be a minimum of two and a maximum of five. Fourteen is way over the limit.

Fix these mistakes in order for your case to be relevant. 