User blog comment:Koishi-Komeiji/The Silence is Broken reviews/@comment-25181180-20151021154303

I've told that I'll be serious this time, and I won't let you slide off, so: Case Name: 8.7/10 Plot: 6.3/10 Creativity: 7.5/10 Effort: 7.8/10 Overall: 7.58 (B+) The case's name should be given a star, that's for sure. It fits well with the case, TBH, and is one of the best one I've ever seen. However, the plot is far too boring and cliche. Drug and thing - blah, blah - drug and lies - blah, blah, that's just somewhat repetitive, poignant, and far too boring, like heck. We want something new, a plot that is unique, a reason that is exotic and different from the others. I suggest you work on the plot, like a lot more. The same plot over and over again will make the readers bored to actually see the reason and skip the entire case background section to the dialogues and others. The other aspects is fine, tho. BTW, if there's a section for the dialogue, then I'd like to give it an A- straight off. If could, I could even give it an A. Rifqitheflipper (talk) 15:43, October 21, 2015 (UTC)