Thread:UnknownGamez/@comment-31710423-20180718153839/@comment-31710423-20181001065001

Hi, again.

Just a small request... Could you please review my Sentenced To Death? Don't rate it, just tell me what is good and where improvement is needed, to the point where I can be an "expert" in structuring plots for CC Fanon. It's OK if you don't want to.

Thank you very much,

Fatal