Thread:PetersCorporal/@comment-26312207-20160207123652/@comment-10907352-20160212163846

I'll be leaving my review for Forged in Blood over here.

Case name: 8/10

Plot: 9/10

Creativity: 10/10

Effort: 8/10

Overall: 8.75 A (Exemplary)

Afterword: All your cases so far are really creative, so I want to congratulate you for that. The only thing I'd suggest improving in this case in changing the plot a little bit. The plot you wrote on the case page starts talking about the contest but it doesn't say what kind of game it is that the victim is playing, so it would help out a lot for people who don't know these kind of games (personally, I don't know what blacksmith is). On the other hand, it was interesting to read and very creative, I have to say again, as I've never seen something similar. Way to go, Erikah!