Thread:PetersCorporal/@comment-26312207-20160207123652/@comment-10907352-20160209194857

May I leave the review in this thread? You can copy and paste it in the case article.

Case name: 9/10

Plot: 9.5/10

Creativity: 10/10

Effort: 8.5/10

Overall: 9.25 A+

Afterword: The plot is great and well developed for a tutorial case, which don't involve much plot normally, so that boosted the case's score up. I just took half a point from the plot score due to some little mistakes in grammar, but the case background can be easily understood so it's ok. If you want to correct it you may ask one of the English-speaking users. It can be seen that you were quite creative when writing your case, so congratulations! I hope you can do even better cases in the future and improve much more. PetersCorporal (talk)