Thread:Inspector Diaz/@comment-26540595-20181225232326/@comment-34133638-20181225234743

Here is too, European time zone and thanks.

Now about the case:

I like that tiny thing that Biobox (That's how I call the table that shows Age, weight etc) is in metric unit, that's very unique. But you have a big gap in the plot. Since you don't do transcripts, you will need a detailed plot with events from all chapters. For example, you don't have Chapter 2 at all in the plot, nor Chapter 3 where need to be shown relations between suspects and the victim, arrest the killer part is also short.

To summary: Main thing to pay attention is the plot. That's the heart of fan case.