Thread:PetersCorporal/@comment-24652096-20150221064523

I was thinking I could do you a favor for being such a good admin and friend. I was thinking that I could correct your dialogues's typos and make it "sound better"

For example, I will use a line from A Lethal Campaign.

Your's: Analyze Hair Sabrina: Wow,   and Chief Alan working together! I can't believe it! Now let's get back to the sample. Sabrina: Unfortunately, the hair was baked along with the canapes. So I lost many useful info. Sabrina: But it's not Alberto's hair. It belongs to the canapes cooker, I mean the killer. And now you know that they have short hair! Alan Smith: If we were in my years, this would be enough to lock the mayor up.

Mine: Analyze Hair

Sabrina: Wow,   and Chief Smith working together! I can't believe it! Eh, I'm getting irrelevant. Now to the sample. Sabrina: Unfortunately, the hair was baked along with the canapes. So I lost a sufficient DNA sample. Sabrina: But I can confirm the hair is not Alberto's hair. It belongs to the chef of the canapes, or the killer. So basically, your killer has short hair Alan Smith: Back in my day, we could place the mayor behind bars

It's just a little bit different, but it can make a difference. 