Thread:UnknownGamez/@comment-31710423-20190615170919/@comment-30456965-20190615181713

I had a read over it and I must say, nice start to your series! You structured the case well and made a good case, so congrats! One thing I’d recommend though is to shorten the plots a tad as it was a bit too long. Regardless of that, though, keep up the good work!