Thread:PetersCorporal/@comment-33827388-20160812011720/@comment-10907352-20160812215657

You don't appear as online on the chat so just in case I'll leave my response here. The case steps are good, though the only things I'd change be:


 * Unlocking a primary crime scene and its secondary crime scene in the same chapter (even more when it's the last chapter)


 * Talking to the killer being the final step or one of the final steps.

The case looks good, just those two things I would change!