Talk:Welcome To Tokyo!/@comment-33827388-20170303024908

Ehrm.... OOOO-ok. List of things that you need to improove, but was a good start.

1 - Instead of "Tasks" put "Steps"

2 - Improove the plot. Create a plot...

3- Make your "Information" like this:

Victim

 * Antluntium Harry (was impaled with a javelin)

Murder Weapon

 * Javelin

Killer

 * Zavok2004