Thread:PetersCorporal/@comment-30233727-20161207002019/@comment-10907352-20161207143832

Black Arrow rated!

I'll leave just an advice for you here. When you write the case's plot, you don't need to write everything that happens throughout the case because some of those things are just not interesting, relevant, or necessary to understand the case you've created. Adding such details like the killer's profiles or many suspect interrogations will result in people getting tired of reading the whole thing, losing interest in what they are seeing, or simply not understanding what you've written since their heads are overloaded with information. I hope you can take this advice and use it for your own advantage! Good luck ;)