Thread:SuccouringArmand/@comment-24574831-20140222023243/@comment-24012291-20140222030155

There are a few things that your case needs:

1. There MUST be a 36 star tally by the end of the case.

2. Try to use correct grammar at all times. I don't know if English is your first language but you need to learn how to use commas, apostrophes, periods and capitals properly.

3. Organize your case into a neat matter! Check one of my cases: An Antiquated Murder to see how to organize your case effectively.

4. Make sure that you have at least two suspects and three Killer's Profile. I'm just saying this in advance to make sure you don't forget.

5. If you prefer, change your "Suspects" layout. Here's my layout that I always use:  Suspect's Profile   Suspect's Appearance  This is just an example of what you can use. Feel free to utilize it if you like!
 * The suspect is asthmatic
 * The suspect drinks whiskey
 * The suspect eats chocolate
 * The suspect wears a striped T-shirt

Overall, your case needs some major adjustments so let's just see if you can fix these and if you can't, just message me again and I'll help you! Thanks for messaging me!