Thread:KyleAsherSPerea03/@comment-26287054-20160604082037

You asked my opinion for your case (Murder Comes First), so here it is! Your case name is already 90/100, but you have many things to fix. Here's the list:

*The plot is okay. If you wish, you can furnish it later.

*The Killer Profile and James' profile DOES NOT match. The KP says the killer has blue eyes, but James has brown.

*For writing steps, (ex.  Prerequisite: Locked Phone Examined: New Suspect: James Savage), for seperating different actions, do not use colon, use semicolon instead.

 That's all from me, thanks:)

  @ldrianyf   ^o^   %  08:20, June 4, 2016 (UTC)  