Thread:PetersCorporal/@comment-27688837-20160129215606/@comment-10907352-20160201195840

Well, I found your case and I can give you some tips on how to improve:


 * You should remove those excessive blank spaces between paragraphs


 * Using tables (I think that's its name in English) will help you a lot with suspects and crime scenes sections. You can take a look at other cases to get an idea of what I'm talking about.


 * When you write steps, it's not necessary to write "Cost: 1 star" for examining clues and talking to suspects, as people already know it when they read the case.