Thread:PetersCorporal/@comment-34597974-20151202114625/@comment-24965192-20151202201025

Investigate Richard's desk Evan: This rag is wet, as if it had... cloroform! And look at it again. Evan: It's so elegant. It has the killer's initials! "MM". It's obviously not Richard's rag, but maybe Mariah's... Evan: And this silver watch has got blood on it. Let's take a sample.

That's the only thing I could find, though. Anyway, it still is his work of fiction and it's really wrong for you to tell him how he should do it. He has his own style of writing and I'm pretty sure you do as well.