Thread:PetersCorporal/@comment-25857913-20150308021058/@comment-10907352-20150308155027

I have corrected some things from your page. The mistakes were basically the ones I had told you in the other message. Please remember to use capital letters when necessary, not to use a space before points, commas and semicolons. The possesive case is 's (for example: the player's, Therese's, the Chief's, Bonnie's, etc.), you don't write just an s.