Thread:CoolCCMystery/@comment-27680690-20200217173607/@comment-27345577-20200218183242

Alright I think it looked pretty good. I added a couple notes below to help you improve.


 * In the teaser where you wrote "is", I believe it should be "it's".
 * Additionally some practice on your grammar can improve the writing and understanding of the plot. But of course, with practice, you can improve.

Good luck on your fanon series!

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